Talk:Alien Abductions/KiTA's Stories/Business Sense
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The aliens have no concept of punishment or retribution so they won't act directly against the villain. In fact her appearance makes them not even want to acknowledge her existence and her motives are too low for their comprehension. | The aliens have no concept of punishment or retribution so they won't act directly against the villain. In fact her appearance makes them not even want to acknowledge her existence and her motives are too low for their comprehension. | ||
| - | One possible scenario: | + | One possible scenario: After a while (days, weeks, more?) the aliens monitoring Janice notice some unhappiness with her situation. They gate in some more girls to the logging camp to harvest this treasure trove of speedily delivered genetic material. |
Janice is then teleported somewhere else where her presence will probably cause serious problems for Ms Oakbridge. | Janice is then teleported somewhere else where her presence will probably cause serious problems for Ms Oakbridge. | ||
Revision as of 09:27, 9 September 2014
Very interesting.
I'm not a big fan of the stereotype of bad guys always coming out on top at the end of bondage stories, so I'll just chime in with a follow-up :) I hope you don't mind, KiTA.
The aliens have no concept of punishment or retribution so they won't act directly against the villain. In fact her appearance makes them not even want to acknowledge her existence and her motives are too low for their comprehension.
One possible scenario: After a while (days, weeks, more?) the aliens monitoring Janice notice some unhappiness with her situation. They gate in some more girls to the logging camp to harvest this treasure trove of speedily delivered genetic material.
Janice is then teleported somewhere else where her presence will probably cause serious problems for Ms Oakbridge.
To make myself clear: I'm not asking for a re-write of the story, which is nicely rounded-off. I'm just speculating on what might happen afterwards.
/Grigbertz
