Talk:Alien Abductions/KiTA's Stories/Business Sense
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: There's also the question of Larry, who probably doesn't believe or trust Amanda. And Amanda likely doesn't have as many friends on the board of directors as she thinks. | : There's also the question of Larry, who probably doesn't believe or trust Amanda. And Amanda likely doesn't have as many friends on the board of directors as she thinks. | ||
: Like most of these I had a specific scenario in mind that I extrapolated the story from -- this one was "A woman in a business suit, looking down at a rival and laughing, tormenting her by abusing the clothing destroying part of the nanites over and over again." | : Like most of these I had a specific scenario in mind that I extrapolated the story from -- this one was "A woman in a business suit, looking down at a rival and laughing, tormenting her by abusing the clothing destroying part of the nanites over and over again." | ||
| + | : The idea of an older / out of shape woman being turned young and healthy as part of being turned into a Receptor girl was also in the front of my mind here. | ||
: [[User:KiTA|KiTA]] 12:26, 9 September 2014 (CEST) | : [[User:KiTA|KiTA]] 12:26, 9 September 2014 (CEST) | ||
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Very interesting.
I'm not a big fan of the stereotype of bad guys always coming out on top at the end of bondage stories, so I'll just chime in with a follow-up :) I hope you don't mind, KiTA.
The aliens have no concept of punishment or retribution so they won't act directly against the villain. In fact her appearance makes them not even want to acknowledge her existence and her motives are too low for their comprehension.
One possible scenario: After a while (days, weeks, more?) the aliens monitoring Janice notice some unhappiness with her situation. They gate in some more girls to the logging camp to harvest this treasure trove of speedily delivered genetic material.
Janice is then teleported somewhere else where her presence will probably cause serious problems for Ms Oakbridge.
To make myself clear: I'm not asking for a re-write of the story, which is nicely rounded-off. I'm just speculating on what might happen afterwards.
/Grigbertz
- Well, there are many ways things could go wrong for Amanda. The board of business people could decide not to declare Janice unfit to run the company -- in that instance Amanda would have guessed right and Janice would be attending board meetings while being propped up and lewdly displayed, for example, while Amanda is stuck supporting her as a glorified assistant. Or, when Amanda goes to deliver Janice to the logging operation in Canada, she finds herself far from civilization and in a prime position to be captured by a glue trap that Janice creates, leaving both Janice AND Amanda stuck at this logging camp as Receptor girls. The board of directors, not liking either woman that much, leaves them both trapped to their fate.
- There's also the question of Larry, who probably doesn't believe or trust Amanda. And Amanda likely doesn't have as many friends on the board of directors as she thinks.
- Like most of these I had a specific scenario in mind that I extrapolated the story from -- this one was "A woman in a business suit, looking down at a rival and laughing, tormenting her by abusing the clothing destroying part of the nanites over and over again."
- The idea of an older / out of shape woman being turned young and healthy as part of being turned into a Receptor girl was also in the front of my mind here.
- KiTA 12:26, 9 September 2014 (CEST)
